tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post8548406843771239129..comments2023-07-15T03:45:36.822-07:00Comments on Surrender: A novella from reality, part IIConinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12267844904414770524noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post-27206736845163775862011-10-27T11:33:31.040-07:002011-10-27T11:33:31.040-07:00@BlackberryTasteIc: I'm.. speechless. I'm ...@BlackberryTasteIc: I'm.. speechless. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You actually brought tears to my eyes.Coninahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12267844904414770524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post-39415747606915949762011-10-27T11:12:41.374-07:002011-10-27T11:12:41.374-07:00Just wow. This was one of the hottest scenes I'...Just wow. This was one of the hottest scenes I've read in a while. You clearly do have a way with words. And I'm trying hard, so so hard, not to read any further than this because I want to have something left that I can look forward to, at least until tomorrow or the weekend, but you and your writing (and yes, I'll admit it, your husband) make it so very hard to have at least some measure of discipline. <br /><br />We'll see how that's going to work out...BlackberryTasteIchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759879067046107322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post-66139761358617585752011-10-01T04:37:38.387-07:002011-10-01T04:37:38.387-07:00I agree with everyone ("what they said")...I agree with everyone ("what they said")!maui girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17493492596306169981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post-56990150863479373052011-09-30T18:54:46.555-07:002011-09-30T18:54:46.555-07:00Thank you both. I'm delighted to be praised so...Thank you both. I'm delighted to be praised so. <br /><br />Rake, my eye was drawn to that line when I proofed as well. I don't really know where the words come from, they just pour out of me as the best way I know how to relate my experiences.<br /><br />pepper, you make me want to read whatever it was you read, dear. Thank YOU for enjoying it so much.Coninahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12267844904414770524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post-52674970976855136852011-09-30T17:42:38.181-07:002011-09-30T17:42:38.181-07:00That.....that was a helluva ride, lady. Pain, and ...That.....that was a helluva ride, lady. Pain, and pleasure, and pain, and dominance....and pleasure, endless intoxicating pleasure. <br /><br />my cap is off to you. This is both titillating and moving, erotic and romantic. You write it well.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing this!pepperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08808829728564140883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1261315018538317662.post-70800825280023127762011-09-30T16:27:29.222-07:002011-09-30T16:27:29.222-07:00You can write. You deliver your novel little tale ...You can write. You deliver your novel little tale in a charmingly colloquial way. Not sure why, but I'm drawn to this line "High and reedy from overuse, the voice of a mad sex crazed woman."Rakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08140321323946146617noreply@blogger.com