I have two very different approaches to this, and the other one will be coming up. I make no guarantees on how quickly. Spanky set this challenge, and though I've written so very much about sucking, I thought I would do a couple of experiments. This is an interlude, expressed in 100 words. Yes, the dialogue makes it difficult.
Collapsed together, exhausted.
"I'd like you to suck my cock. Think you can do that?"
"Maybe. Would that make your sex life better?"
"Oh, yes."
Gently licking, soft sounds of pleasure. Hard, but soft, smooth, slick as my mouth slides onto him.
Cock slowly fills my mouth and throat. Thigh across my neck, simultaneous trap and comfort.
His hand, impatient with my shirt. "I want to fondle you."
Exposing my breasts, eagerly obedient. Nipple trapped, pinched; we both moan as I suck hard.
Exploding, roaring. "Too good for me."
His thigh stays; I am owned, safe, adored.
We sleep.
The dialogue is perfect. What a beautiful hot poem you made.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It was a lot harder to get the mood across with so few words than I thought it would be.
DeleteWow! This makes me want to try harder to enjoy worshipping my husband's cock. Before we started most anything dd/ttwd, our first rule was that if he asked then I had to suck. Any hesitation or refusal got me a spanking that wasn't fun or erotic. I have gotten better at giving but I still wouldn't say it is something I enjoy doing. Maybe I need to think about it differently. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteOh, as I once told my husband, if my writing makes even one person enjoy something about sex more, that is a win and the world is that much better.
DeleteIt really is a headspace thing, and I think you'll find the more you enjoy it, the more you both will enjoy each other.
Succinct. Good take. Looking forward to the other one.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Yours is so awesome too!
DeleteIt's no surprise mouse loves sucking Omega!!! It's just bliss.
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Oh, yes it is, mouse. Nothing quite like it.
DeleteAwesome Conina. Very hot.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I worked pretty hard on getting it right. :)
DeleteI agree, this is most excellent! I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I did two because I really wanted the academic essay style, (you asked for an essay, after all), but after this happened, it seemed to illustrate the entire point very well too.
Delete*blushes* I like it cause ..... I like ... kinda a lot.... that he's rather at my mercy for that interlude. Not very submissive (hangs head), I like to give him that.
ReplyDelete*applauds* Bravo!
DeleteI used to try to approach it from that angle, you know, because I'd done a lot of reading that said the power of it was exhilarating, but I never could manage. I suppose the power of having that much pleasure available to give him... but that just makes me feel good, not particularly powerful.
I totally get what you mean, though. :)
Very good in such a succint manner - a very good job!
ReplyDeleteAll your inspiration! Thank you. :)
Deletelove this, i think this should be a weekly thing for everyone. 100 words on what you enjoy most about your relationship. sometimes less means more.
ReplyDeleteMuch like a haiku, it's quite a bit of effort to squeeze everything you want into that 100 words. It could be a good weekly feature, you're right.
DeleteExactly, I bet it is. Some days I have a hard time getting 100 words and others it all spills out.
ReplyDeleteWhat's up, I log on to your new stuff regularly. Your writing style is awesome, keep up the good work!
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GF use to love to suck, but now i have to ask, takes away the love feeling. But yes she will do it every time.
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